A friend has agreed to look after your house and pet while you are on holiday. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: • give contact details for when you are away • give instructions on how to care for your pet • describe other household duties

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Hey jack, It is been a long time since I haven’t heard from you. I hope you will be fine and your family members are

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doing well. In fact, once I asked you and you agreed I was chuff. I am flying to Toronto on 21 December

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; I want to inform you of some of the crucial notes. Perhaps, my cell phone number will not be working

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; I will available to answer queries by mail if any occurred. My Tommy is very sensitive in terms of morning walk so request to you please don’t miss his morning work. Apart from that, you can give him food twice a day.

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, do not forget to open the switch of the outside light even though, no one is at home. In the morning, you will find the newspaper hanging on the door as I have instructed to newspaper vendor so, please keep it inside. Rest, you know well and you can find the keys to my house from my

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. Looking forward to your reply. Best wishes, MISBAHA

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

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7 paragraphs

182 words

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