You are studying for a qualification, and you would like some time off work to complete it. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter: Ask for some time off to complete a qualification. Suggest what you will do later at work if you have time off. Say how the qualification helps your job or company.
Dear Manager,
I hope
this
letter finds you in good health. the main reason for writing this
letter is to ask your permission to take time off from my work
, to complete a new qualification. It starts on the 10th of this
month and ends on the 15th. As my co-worker is free during these days, I think this
is the best time to do my smart serve certification
. Moreover
, this
certification
might be helpful to our company's growth.
After I complete this
certification
, I will try to work
according to
my schedule, and I will try to teach all the contents to other staff making it easy for them to get their certification
without any hard work
, making them qualified to do work
in certification
required field.
Furthermore
, with this
qualification, I can work
in the bar section of our company, as we are running short of employees in the bar, with this
certification
I can fill the requirement. As I'm already trained in a lot of areas in our restaurant, having this
certification
might help our company a lot. I would be very grateful if you accept my request. Looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours Faithfully,
Srinivas Varma.Submitted by varmaib1 on
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Task Achievement
To improve your score in task achievement, be sure to thoroughly address all parts of the prompt. You've done well in explaining the reason for taking time off and its benefits to the company. Expanding on how exactly the new qualification will enhance your skills and directly benefit specific areas of your job or company can add more depth to your response.
Coherence and Cohesion
For coherence and cohesion, you've structured your letter well with clear paragraphs each focusing on a single idea which is good practice. To further enhance this, consider using a wider range of linking words and phrases to better connect your ideas. Additionally, ensure that transitions between paragraphs are smooth and logical.