A friend of yours is coming to stay in your house for a week while you are away on holiday. Write a letter to your friend to prepare them for their stay. In your letter: Give your friend information about the location of your house, tell your friend what tasks you would like them to do each day, Explain what he/she can do and see in your area

Dear John, How are you? I hope you are well. I am writing to let you know how to assist me in taking care of my residency. My house is located on 57th Ave in Vancouver and on the 6th floor of Shannon Mews's apartment, so it is convenient for you to take the sky train to reach here.
Additionally
, you can use my magnetic key to access my unit. I appreciate that you can feed my hamster daily with one spoon of his forage, and you can exchange his water daily.
Moreover
, you can
also
help me to check my mailbox and inquiry the front desk receptionist whether he has any package. You can take a walking tour in a proximity park which is surrounded by flora, and there is a playground where you can sit there to appreciate the magnificent scenery.
Moreover
, one organic supermarket is one block away from my house, so you can visit there to find delectable food. I look forward to waiting for you to visit my house and I wish you enjoy your accommodation. Warm wishes, Claire
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite

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