Some people think that modern technology is making people more sociable, while others think it is making then less sociable. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Many individuals

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believe

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belive

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believe

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that with help of the state-of-the-art technology

people

become more talkative.

However

, others think that

this

is the reason which makes

people

less talkative. It

is seems

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to me that even though modern technology includes its pluses it has bad effects

for

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on

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the

sociable

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social

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life of a person. On the right hand, there is a benefit

from

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to

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current technology. It gives an opportunity to the humanity to be in touch with friends or

with

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apply

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relatives anytime.

For instance

, my father works as a manager of a

GM's

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GM

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car factory.

Although

he has a

well paid

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occupation he is often on business trips.

Hence

, we miss him a lot but in

this

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matter

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matter

metter

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we are helped by a phone program called Sky. We usually use one of its functions which is to see

face

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the face

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of a person who is calling.

Consequently

, we will not worry about him.

On the other hand

, there is an impediment

about

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this

. Due to

program

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programs

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of

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the

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apply

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smartphone

such

as telegram,

instagram

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Instagram

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people

have stopped socializing with their parents.

For example

, almost 77% of matures spend more time

for

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in

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virtual life, talking with virtual

people

.

This

all makes them nervous and nervous.

Therefore

, they develop deficiencies in their nerve cells. In conclusion, I think that though it is supposed by many individuals

firstly

, they harm human health and secondary, it makes up a lot of time

instead

of communicating with a person's family.