Some people think that modern technology is making people more sociable, while others think it is making then less sociable. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Many individuals
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believe
belive
that with help of the state-of-the-art technology Correct your spelling
believe
people
become more talkative. However
, others think that this
is the reason which makes people
less talkative. It is seems
to me that even though modern technology includes its pluses it has bad effects Change the verb form
seems
for
the Change preposition
on
sociable
life of a person.
On the right hand, there is a benefit Replace the word
social
from
current technology. It gives an opportunity to the humanity to be in touch with friends or Change preposition
to
with
relatives anytime. Change preposition
apply
For instance
, my father works as a manager of a GM's
car factory. Change noun form
GM
Although
he has a well paid
occupation he is often on business trips. Add a hyphen
well-paid
Hence
, we miss him a lot but in this
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matter
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matter
metter
we are helped by a phone program called Sky. We usually use one of its functions which is to see Add a comma
,metter
face
of a person who is calling. Add an article
the face
Consequently
, we will not worry about him.
On the other hand
, there is an impediment about
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to
this
. Due to program
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programs
of
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apply
the
smartphone Correct article usage
apply
such
as telegram, instagram
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Instagram
people
have stopped socializing with their parents. For example
, almost 77% of matures spend more time for
virtual life, talking with virtual Change preposition
in
people
. This
all makes them nervous and nervous. Therefore
, they develop deficiencies in their nerve cells.
In conclusion, I think that though it is supposed by many individuals firstly
, they harm human health and secondary, it makes up a lot of time instead
of communicating with a person's family.Submitted by makemoneyizzy16 on
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