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Some people say that watching TV programmes and movies related to crime are popular. Why do you think it is popular and how does it affect society?

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These days dyas television and
movies
programme
 are becoming more and more popular in
a
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society
 and
people
 now prefer to watch programmes that are related to
crime
.
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 In our ,
society
 today
crime
 has increased so much that it has caused more problems in our
society
 it has turned some societies from good to bad and
people
 have started making use of guns due to
crime
 and the view of what they watch in
movies
 and making the
children's
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 start learning how to make use of
a bad weapons
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.
firstly
 in today's activities
crime
 has developed so much that insecurity has become our daily news
as a result
 of
crime
 so,
therefore
,
therefore
people
 prefer to watch what is happening in
society
 in other to prevent themselves in
society
. ,
secondly
 due to
crime
 in ,
society
people
 now watching
movies
 related to
crime
 are now becoming more populated to compare to
movies
 to teach about other things
for example
 talk of Ukraine and the Russian war which have resulted in killing and have caused
the
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serious effects on the world. so,
therefore
,
therefore
people
 now watch more and view the channels related to
the
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crime
 to learn more about how to prevent themselves.adult who is watching
this
programme
have
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 an advantage compared to
children
 and
crime
 can be seriously stopped in
society
 if the government put
an
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other from viewing the
programme
 and showing erotic
movies
 and news which is causing more
crime
 and making the societies focus more on the watching of those programmes and stop
crime
 in the
society
.it will help bring the peace in the
society
. In these ,case adult gains more from watching the
programme
 to know how to secure they self which
this
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is a very serious disadvantage where our
children
. to sum ,
up
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crime
 have caused more effects on our
teenagers
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society
 and adults have learned a lot from watching programmes and
movies
.and it can be prevented by not viewing all the
crime
 channels and related movie on
children
.
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