Some people believe that it is more common way to learn history by watching movies instead of reading books. Does the advantages of this ought weight the disadvantages?

Nowadays, one of the widely discussed issues is that watching films is becoming widely accessible to learn

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turning point in human

history

.

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, there is no absolute agreement as many find it beneficial whereas others consider everything associated with

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. From my point of view, it opens the door to

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more opportunities to remember

history

. There are a number of significant benefits of movies which assist both elders and adolescents to know cultural

history

. It is undeniable that

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way is extremely effective for

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since they are able to find the meaning of historical words and events which must be learned by people

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teenagers.

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some kinds of movies is be becoming one of the most popular activities to just kill the

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youngsters

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the youngsters

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observe films to

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time

and learn

history

in developed countries

such

as Korea. Turning to the other side of the argument, the oblivious disadvantage is that it afflicts

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health significantly.

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is emitted by devices , effects negatively to humans especially the envision if they have stayed in front of

television

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for a long

time

.

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, according to research, in my country many watch movies when they have leisure

time

and it

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them to have fun.

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cause to

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envision ability and to be overweight. In conclusion, having

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weighted

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everything mentioned up , I can come to

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that many

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out films are the best method to go down

history

. In my opinion, despite of being some disadvantages, it has more

advantageous

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.