Some experts believe that it is better for children to begin learning a foreign language at primary school rather than secondary school. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

A number of people advocate that foreign
language
training should be at elementary
school
rather than middle
school
.
This
essay will examine the advantages and disadvantages of these statements and provide a logical conclusion. On the one hand, learning a foreign
language
should
be begin
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since
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primary
school
. Because kids will have
language
idea
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ideas
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and it will be easy to learn
this
tongue.
Also
, learning a
second
language
in many countries is significant and
students
can learn
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better for their future growth.
For instance
, in Thailand, children from
early
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their early
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years in
schools
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school
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learn English, so when they grow up
with
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them
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formed
a
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good English. Languages are very helpful in
brain
development, so it is important for early
students
to learn a foreign
language
and improve their
brain
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brains
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.
For instance
, when
early
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student
learning
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learns
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a new
language
, two hemispheres of the
brain
work which has a good impact on the student’s development.
On the other hand
, there
are
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multitude
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of disadvantages of
language
learning in primary
school
.
Firstly
, primary
school
burden and inability to accept new information. So we should not overburden primary
school
students
.
For instance
, many earlier
students
gets
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a
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brain
cancer in China, due to
brain
fatigue.
Secondly
, earlier
students
should get used to
system
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the system
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of education and
than
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then
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when they
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are litle
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litle
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little
grow-up
choice
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between
learn
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learning
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foreign
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a foreign
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language
or not. After
that
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,that
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they can understand the importance of learning new languages.
For example
, when
i
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studied at primary
school
,
i
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dont
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don't
recognize
significance
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the significance
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of foreign
language
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languages
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. In conclusion, there
are
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multitude
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a multitude
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of advantages and disadvantages of learning foreign languages at primary
school
. The most important thing is that the student can have a picture of the
language
and develop himself. If we talk about shortcomings is that
students
don't get used to
system
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the system
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and they do not realize the significance of foreign
language
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languages
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.
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