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Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems.

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There is a contentious debate where Some individuals Perceive that today the major obstacle
of
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natural
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environment
 is the loss of specific species of
animals
 and plants,
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whereas
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whereas
 others
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believe
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 that there are more vital environmental problems. I Personally deem that both notions should be taken under consideration and both
point
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 of
views
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 will be discussed in the following Paragraphs.
Firstly
, these days more and more
animals
 are being hunted for Various types of purposes like food, sport, clothes
and
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etcetera.
For instance
, restaurants
hunting
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animals
 down in order to expand the variety of the
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menu
menue
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menu
.
As a result
, Some
animals
 are at
the
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risk of being extinct. So, humans are eliminating these
animals
 from their natural habitat and
this
 is
considerably
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 dangerous for the
environment
.
secondly
, People are enthusiastic about plants
especially
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 those who
intrigued
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in
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 growing them in their houses.
Thua
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, a diverse range of Plants is being
lossed
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lost
 and
as a result
 air pollution is becoming a disaster for
the
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governments to handle with.
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They
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Thirdly
, some communities think that there are other preponderant environmental problems
such
 as global warming. They believe that
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global warming
as
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an
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example can cause difficulties for
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 that comprise the loss of particular species as well. I reckon that both views are somehow connected with each other and the governments should raise awareness towards environmental Problems. Because the more educated people are in
this
 matter, the more advantageous it is for the
environment
. To conclude, there
are
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 various
obstacle
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 engaged with
natural
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environment
 that
are
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 related to each other. It should be
manatory
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mandatory
from
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 governments and people to pay attention to
environment
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the environment
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.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • biodiversity
  • extinction
  • habitat loss
  • ecosystem
  • food chain
  • imbalance
  • interconnected
  • climate change
  • pollution
  • personal actions
  • policy changes
  • education
  • awareness
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