Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems.

There is a contentious debate where Some individuals Perceive that today the major obstacle to the natural

environment

is the loss of specific species of

animals

and plants, whereas others

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that there are more vital environmental problems. I Personally deem that both notions should be taken under consideration and both points of view will be discussed in the following Paragraphs.

Firstly

, these days more and more

animals

are being hunted for Various types of purposes like food, sport, clothes

and

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etcetera.

For instance

, restaurants are hunting

animals

down in order to expand the variety of the menu.

As a result

, Some

animals

are at

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risk of being extinct. So, humans are eliminating these

animals

from their natural habitat and

this

is significantly dangerous for the

environment

.

secondly

, People are enthusiastic about plants

especially

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those who are intrigued

in

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growing them in their houses.

Thus

, a diverse range of Plants is being lost and

as a result

air pollution is becoming a disaster for governments to handle with.

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They

Thidy

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Thirdly

, some communities think that there are other preponderant environmental problems

such

as global warming. They believe

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that global warming as an example can cause difficulties for the

environment

that comprise the loss of particular species as well. I reckon that both views are somehow connected with each other and the government should raise awareness towards environmental Problems. Because the more educated people are in

this

matter, the more advantageous it is for the

environment

. To conclude, there are various obstacles engaged with the natural

environment

that are related to each other. It should be mandatory

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governments and people to pay attention to the

environment

.