Some people say that the only reason for learning a foreign language is in order to travel to or work in a foreign country. Others say that these are not the only reasons why someone should learn a foreign language. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

A group of
people
opine that
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acquiring
knowledge about other
countries
languages
only for tourism and work only. while some
other
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think that not only
that
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two
causes
, but
also
so many other
causes
people
learn foreign
languages
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along with precise examples and
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my view.
First
of all, most
of
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the
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people
learn
foreign
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a foreign
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language
for
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to
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visit
others
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other
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countries
, because during
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the visit
a visit
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they have to communicate different places for their visit purposes, or when they know their
language
, which
help
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to solve many problems.
For example
, a significant number of Chinese
people
don't know other
languages
, so
that
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apply
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visitors
in
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China musk have to know their
language
for communication,
otherwise
hair
a interpreters
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interpreters
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.
Secondly
, a group of
people
learn
others
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other
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countries
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language
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for their work, because they exchange their information different purposes.
For instance
, discrete
countries
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country
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ambassadors learn
others
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others'
other's
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language
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for building
excellent
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an excellent
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relationship
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relationships
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with other
countries
,
even
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and even
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business
causes
human
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humans
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learn
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to learn
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others
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others'
other's
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language
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to sell their products.
However
,a large proportion of
people
learn
others
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other languages
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language
for their study purposes. many students pursue their higher education
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in others
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others
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other
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country's
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countries
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and their classes
held
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are held
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on
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in
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different
languages
,
for example
,
Asian
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in Asian
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countries
mother
language
is not English but when they go to
USA
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the USA
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for their higher education they are compulsory to learn
English
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language
.
Moreover
, many students study
language
analysis,
as
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a result, they learn
others
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other languages
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language
to improve their knowledge and good results.
For example
,
Dhaka
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a Dhaka
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University
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group of students learn
other
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another language
other languages
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language
, because they have to go
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to
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ancent
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ancient
Palace to invent something new. in conclusion, it is obvious that now globalisation human
learn
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learns
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language
varieties of
causes
beside of
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besides
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tour and work,
however
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,however
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from today context latter proposition are gaining more popularity and utility.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • multilingual
  • linguistic proficiency
  • globalized world
  • cross-cultural communication
  • immersive experience
  • adaptability
  • cultural exchange
  • interpersonal skills
  • employment prospects
  • empathy
  • intellectual development
  • overcome language barriers
  • global market
  • resourceful
  • life-changing
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