Some people say that the only reason for learning a foreign language is in order to travel to or work in a foreign country. Others say that these are not the only reasons why someone should learn a foreign language. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
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people
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knowledge about other Correct your spelling
acquiring
countries
languages
only for tourism and work only. while some other
think that not only Fix the agreement mistake
others
that
two Correct pronoun usage
those
causes
, but also
so many other causes
people
learn foreign languages
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along with precise examples and Change to a plural noun
sides
backup
my view.
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First
of all, most of
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apply
the
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people
learn foreign
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a foreign
language
for
visit Change preposition
to
others
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other
countries
, because during visit
they have to communicate different places for their visit purposes, or when they know their Add an article
the visit
a visit
language
, which help
to solve many problems. Change the verb form
helps
For example
, a significant number of Chinese people
don't know other languages
, so that
visitors Correct word choice
apply
in
China musk have to know their Change preposition
to
language
for communication, otherwise
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.
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interpreters
an interpreter
Secondly
, a group of people
learn others
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other
countries
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countries'
country's
language
for their work, because they exchange their information different purposes. Fix the agreement mistake
languages
For instance
, discrete countries
ambassadors learn Change the noun form
country
others
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others'
other's
language
for building Fix the agreement mistake
languages
excellent
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an excellent
relationship
with other Fix the agreement mistake
relationships
countries
, even
business Correct word choice
and even
causes
human
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humans
learn
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to learn
others
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others'
other's
language
to sell their products.
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languages
However
,a large proportion of people
learn others
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other languages
language
for their study purposes. many students pursue their higher education Change preposition
in others
others
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other
country's
and their classes Change noun form
countries
held
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are held
on
different Change preposition
in
languages
, for example
, Asian
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in Asian
countries
mother language
is not English but when they go to USA
for their higher education they are compulsory to learn Correct article usage
the USA
English
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the English
language
.
Moreover
, many students study language
analysis, as
a result, they learn Correct word choice
and as
others
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other languages
language
to improve their knowledge and good results. For example
, Dhaka
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a Dhaka
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group of students learn Change noun form
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other
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another language
other languages
language
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to
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Palace to invent something new.
in conclusion, it is obvious that now globalisation human Correct your spelling
ancient
learn
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learns
language
varieties of causes
beside of
tour and work, Change preposition
besides
however
from today context latter proposition are gaining more popularity and utility.Add a comma
,however
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