Some people think it is more important to spend money on roads and motorways than on public transport systems. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Agree or disagree

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money
on
road
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roads
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,
motorways
and as well spending
money
on public transport
system
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systems
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is equally the same which means that you can as well spend
money
at any point even on the
road
or motorway and public transport system. In my own point of ,view it is well understood
that is
quite easy for
one
to
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money
on the
road
for example
in my country whereby we move with cash and the automated card is possible to afford
whateverwhatever
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whatever whatever
is needed to purchase what is valuable on the
road
.
for
instance
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for
motorways
it has resulted that
one
can be driving I decided to park and spend
money
.but in the case of a public transportation system is very different
that is
possible not to spend
money
because you don't have your own time to get what your want,it is that once the vehicle left the park won't be chanced to spend
money
..so,
therefore
,
therefore
does that use public transport spend lesser
money
getting what they need to compare to does on the
road
and as well does on
motorways
. In ,
conclusion
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is quite
understand
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that
one
can spend
money
at any given point,so
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therefore
I totally agree
that is
possible for
one
to spend
money
on the
road
,
motorways
and public transportation is different.
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  • Infrastructure
  • Transportation
  • Congestion
  • Economy
  • Carbon emissions
  • Pollution
  • Social inclusion
  • Urban development
  • Efficient
  • Investment
  • Reliance
  • Boosting
  • Affordable
  • Private vehicle users
  • Public transport system
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