Do you believe that self-driving cars will become common in the near future? Why or why not? Support your answer with reasons and expamles from your own knowledge or experience.

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In recent years,some
car
companies have started the production of
autonomous
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car
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which is becoming a global threat. Personally, I am of the opinion that robotic cars will be less common or completely extinct from the world in the nearest future.
This
essay will be discussing the reasons for my opinion with a relevant example.
Firstly
, a driverless
car
can become a source of road traffic
accident
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due to machine
dilemma
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dilemmas
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.
For example
,
a
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situation whereby if the
car
turn
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right, it will hit a tree and hurt the passenger and if it
turn
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left,it will hit a crossing
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pedestrian
pedestrians
pedentrian
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pedestrian
,
this
dilemma can lead to
accident
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.
Secondly
,
risk
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of being hacked, since it is a machine,the
possibilities
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possibility
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of
been
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hack
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by criminals is high and it can cause machine errors or failure which might have been avoided if it is controlled by the user.
Thirdly
,job loss is another issue,
this
can affect those who
depends
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on driving to make a living
such
as truck drivers, taxi and bus drivers because they might not be able to take care of their expenses.
Additionally
,the cost of getting a self-driving
car
is worth a fortune and
this
may discourage people from purchasing
such
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a such
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car
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a car
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.
For instance
, a normal
car
can cause
25,000dollars
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25,000 dollars
but a robotic
car
can
be
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triple that amount since it
produce
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with
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more expensive and robotic products. In summary,
autonomous
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car
may have some positive effects but the disadvantages is the main reasons why
it
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might not be common in the future.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • autonomous vehicles
  • artificial intelligence (AI)
  • machine learning
  • innovations
  • technological revolution
  • smart infrastructure
  • regulatory framework
  • safety protocols
  • mass adoption
  • user trust
  • green technology
  • carbon footprint
  • disruptive technology
  • labor displacement
  • economic efficiency
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