Do you believe that self-driving cars will become common in the near future? Why or why not? Support your answer with reasons and expamles from your own knowledge or experience.

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companies have started the production of

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which is becoming a global threat. Personally, I am of the opinion that robotic cars will be less common or completely extinct from the world in the nearest future.

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, a driverless

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can become a source of road traffic

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due to machine

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situation whereby if the

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right, it will hit a tree and hurt the passenger and if it

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left,it will hit a crossing

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dilemma can lead to

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of being hacked, since it is a machine,the

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by criminals is high and it can cause machine errors or failure which might have been avoided if it is controlled by the user.

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,job loss is another issue,

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can affect those who

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on driving to make a living

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as truck drivers, taxi and bus drivers because they might not be able to take care of their expenses.

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,the cost of getting a self-driving

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is worth a fortune and

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may discourage people from purchasing

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, a normal

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can cause

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but a robotic

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triple that amount since it

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more expensive and robotic products. In summary,

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may have some positive effects but the disadvantages is the main reasons why

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might not be common in the future.

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Nov 25, 2022

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.5

Complete response

7.5

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

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autonomous vehicles
artificial intelligence (AI)
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technological revolution
smart infrastructure
regulatory framework
safety protocols
mass adoption
user trust
green technology
carbon footprint
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labor displacement
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