In the future, we will have more and more leisure time as machines will replace many of the tasks we do at home and work now. Discuss the benefits this will bring and also the problem it will cause. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Due to the advent of technology in the coming days more and more works at our homes and workplace are taken care of by auto
machines
which leads to more spare time
for humans. I believe this
trend has multiple benefits such
as we can avoid human injuries , and speed and accuracy is the indirect effect.
The only disadvantage of this
practice leads to increase unemployment
. I am going to elaborate in detail in the following paragraphs.
It is undeniable, that when we use machines
for day-to-day tasks, we can expect Correct article usage
an accidents
accidents
free workplace which is very much obvious in human efforts, For ,instance cutting vegetables or chopping meat, All we need do Fix the agreement mistake
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it
is check the output if we need to any changes just Correct pronoun usage
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another prominent benefit is when we use Remove the article
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Machines
for production we can have output in less time
frame and be more accurately
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machines
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Thus
I believe that using automation in our household chores and workplace have
increasing benefits.
Admittedly , despite the attractive benefits Correct subject-verb agreement
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this
fashion also
leads to some inevitable drawbacks. The rate of unemployment
shall increase due to companies inclined towards machines
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For example
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the replacement
machines
both in the residential and industrial sectors. Thus
I assert that Complete automation is adverse the employment opportunities .
In conclusion, Robots and electronic gadgets can produce items not only in short
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a short
time
but also
very accurately with zero accident rate. Despite this
shining benefit big adverse of this
scenario is unemployment
which detrimental to the
society.Correct article usage
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
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