Mrs Barret, an English-speaking woman who lives in your hometown, has advertised for someone to help her in her home for a few hours a day next summer. Write a letter to Mrs Barret. In your letter - Suggest how you could help her in her home - Say why you would like to do this work - Explain when you will and will not be available

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Dear Mrs Barrett, I am writing you

this

letter to see an advertisement which is related to helping you in your home for

summer.

Although

I do not have enough experience, I can clean all rooms once a week.

In addition

, I have attended a course which is about cooking before, so if you want, before you come to your home, I can cook various meals that you want. As I know, you have a dog whose name is Lucy. I can walk in the park with her. Nowadays, I am out of work, so I have not found any job for a long time and my job did not take long. As I said, even though I do not have much knowledge, I would like to do

this

job. I want to learn everything and gain money as much as possible.

In addition

, I can help you on weekdays until 20.00 o’clock ,

however

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I will not appropriate on Saturdays because of my courses which are about good communication with people lesson. I look forward to your decision on whether I am available or not. Yours faithfully, Lucy Brown

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5Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
1Grammar mistakes
 

8 paragraphs

190 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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