Mrs Barret, an English-speaking woman who lives in your hometown, has advertised for someone to help her in her home for a few hours a day next summer. Write a letter to Mrs Barret. In your letter - Suggest how you could help her in her home - Say why you would like to do this work - Explain when you will and will not be available
Dear Mrs Barrett,
I am writing you
this
letter to see an advertisement which is related to helping you in your home for next
summer.
Although
I do not have enough experience, I can clean all rooms once a week. In addition
, I have attended a course which is about cooking before, so if you want, before you come to your home, I can cook various meals that you want. As I know, you have a dog whose name is Lucy. I can walk in the park with her.
Nowadays, I am out of work, so I have not found any job for a long time and my job did not take long. As I said, even though I do not have much knowledge, I would like to do this
job. I want to learn everything and gain money as much as possible.
In addition
, I can help you on weekdays until 20.00 o’clock ,however
I will not appropriate on Saturdays because of my courses which are about good communication with people lesson.
I look forward to your decision on whether I am available or not.
Yours faithfully,
Lucy BrownAdd a comma
,however
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- although
- even though
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