There have been some problems with the bus service, especially its reliability, in your area over the last two weeks. Write a letter to the manager of the bus company. In your letter • describe what the problems are • explain how these problems are affecting you • suggest what you would like the company to do You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear ..........., You should write at least 150 words.

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to request an improvement on the continual bad transportation facility provided over the
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two weeks by your
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company in the MG Road area. One major problem which our locality has been facing is unreliable
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facilities. The buses do not arrive as per the schedule at the designated
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stops due to which daily commuters have to wait for a long time.
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, the monthly pass service has been terminated without any prior notification. The ticket conductors refuse to accept the passes and explain that it is the manager's order to not accept passes while collecting the fares. Owing to these problems, I am usually reaching the office late and missing my daily 9 a.m. client meetings . Because of
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, my manager has warned me that
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may affect my
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quarter's appraisal, and if
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continues, it may lead to my termination.
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, because of the ended pass service I have to pay the fare for each trip while commuting, which is proving uneconomical and derailing my daily household budget. I would like to express my dissatisfaction with the service provided over the past two weeks and suggest resuming the pass system as usual and instructing the drivers to start on time from the respective
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stands so that they can reach as per the schedule at each
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stop of our locality. Yours faithfully, XYZ
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