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Some people claim that not enough of waste from homes is recycled.They say that the only way to increase recycling is for governments to make it a legal requirement.To what extent do you think laws are needed to make people recycle more of their waste?

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On the charts, there is information about the distribution of money spent on music in Northern Ireland in 2005, 2008 and 2011. There are four categories: CDs, concerts, digital downloads and other sources. In 2005, the majority, (61% of the people) spent their money to buy CDs, but going to concerts was
also
 a popular activity (31%). Digital downloads were one of the lowest percentages with just 6%. In 2008, spending money on CDs started to decline, and with a sharp fall in 2011, the value was just 26% compared to 61%. At the same time, digital dowloads started to rise up: in 2011, 43% of the chart were filled with the category.
Furthermore
, we can see that concerts started to decrease between 2005 and 2008, but in 2011, it increased back to approximately the same percent when it was in 2005. Other sources basically did not really change over the years, it stagnated between 2% and 3%.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Waste management
  • Recycling
  • Sustainability
  • Mandatory
  • Voluntary
  • Legislative measures
  • Environmental impact
  • Public awareness
  • Regulation
  • Sanctions
  • Compliance
  • Recycling facilities
  • Consumer behavior
  • Waste reduction
  • Resource conservation
  • Circular economy
  • Eco-friendly
  • Biodegradable
  • Landfill
  • Global initiative
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