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Humans are responsible for a variety of environmental problems, but we can also take steps to reduce the damage that we are causing to the planet. This essay will discuss environmental problems and the measures that governments and individuals can take to address these problems.

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There is no iota of doubt about the fact our environment is facing a lot of
problems
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. A large number of people argue that
individuals
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 should solve these
problems
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 whereas some argue that
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a government
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government
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 responsibility. In
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 essay, we are going to discuss the
problems
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 and what the measures
government
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 and
individuals
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 can take to resolve these
problems
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. The main complication of environmental
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 is
air
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 pollution. Indeed, it is hard to take fresh
air
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 in
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 polluted cities
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 as Tokyo, New York, Delhi, and Mumbai.
air
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 quality index of these cities is very bad every day.
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, in Delhi if you check
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air
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the air
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 quality index in November-December months it will show you 400 which is worse for the general public, No politician is worried about that. To curb these
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individuals
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 and authority both have their own duties. authority should spend a good amount of budget on public transport and they should run an awareness campaign for the public to use these.
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, In berlin, their
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 is encouraging people to use public transport
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 of using private motor cars,
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, their
air
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 quality index is improved.
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Individuals
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 should understand that
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 is their duty to save our environment and they should not only use public transport but
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 encourage other people to do the same. In conclusion, even though there are great environmental
problems
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, if the public and
government
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 work with each other they can solve
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 problem very easily,

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