Some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Nowadays, it seems we have too many
options
. Use synonyms
This
idea would be true in some aspects. Linking Words
However
, I totally disagree with Linking Words
this
statement because more Linking Words
choices
are still accessible for Use synonyms
few
Correct article usage
a few
people
.
It is irrefutable that, today, Use synonyms
the
modern society and a large population have changed Correct article usage
apply
people
’s lives dramatically. Many Use synonyms
people
have been encouraged to be entrepreneurs to create their own brands in order to achieve financial freedom, stability, and prosperity. Use synonyms
As a result
, the market has become much more competitive since there are many Linking Words
choices
for one kind of Use synonyms
products
. Fix the agreement mistake
product
For example
, twenty years ago, there were just Linking Words
few
local clothes designers in my Change the article
a few
countries
. Now the number has Fix the agreement mistake
country
been
significantly increased, with a wide range of prices. Unnecessary verb
apply
This
could benefit the customers as we have more Linking Words
options
but there is Use synonyms
more
profound issue to consider.
Correct article usage
a more
This
is because more Linking Words
options
Use synonyms
does
not mean more freedom of Change the verb form
do
Use synonyms
choices
. Wealthy Fix the agreement mistake
choice
people
can afford Use synonyms
the
better Correct article usage
apply
choices
regardless of price while deprived Use synonyms
people
have always been limited to worse Use synonyms
choices
due to their financial limitations. Use synonyms
For instance
, even if many more schools have opened in my Linking Words
neighborhood
, it has not Change the spelling
neighbourhood
benefit
the lower class because those institutions are private and expensive. Change the verb form
benefited
Consequently
, rich families have more Linking Words
choices
but poor families still have few Use synonyms
choices
. There is inequality among Use synonyms
people
to have more or Use synonyms
less
Change the quantifier
fewer
choices
. Money is the main factor Use synonyms
of
having more Change preposition
in
choices
.
In conclusion, Use synonyms
the
modern society provides us much more Correct article usage
apply
options
in life. I, Use synonyms
however
, think that Linking Words
this
is just an illusion when those Linking Words
options
remain unreachable for many.Use synonyms
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite