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Using a computer everyday can have more negative than positive effects on children. Do you agree or disagree? Give reason for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

#computer #effects #children #reason
It is true that
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brought
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brought
 with it significant consequences,
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at
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 the
youths
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.I strongly agree with
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 will explain my point of view. The negative effects that are caused by using
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a computer
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computer
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 for long hours are numerous.
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,
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teenagers, who prefer playing video games, are
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predisposed
predispose
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predisposed
 to have a sedentary life.
This
 is because, they stay inside rather than doing outdoor activities
such
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football
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fotball
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football
, communicating
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 face with their friends and so on.needless to say, while they are spending their free time in front of the
computer
, they
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 to eat junk food namely chocolate, fried
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potatoes
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 etc.
Moreover
, being unsupervised by their parents, who are working long hours to compete in
this
 stiff work competition, the risk of talking online with
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strangers
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strangers
 and even
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 is extremely increased. Due to
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their
the
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their
 immaturity, they cannot distinguish the evilness and the mental illness of certain adults.
for example
, in
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studies have shown that nearly half of
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teenagers fall
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parade
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pedophilism
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. one more important reason is that children neglect their studies, in
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 of playing online. the temptation of playing rather than doing their homework or learning is much higher, in
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immature
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 period of their lives.as a consequence they remain behind their colleague which is detrimental
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 their future.
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researchers
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Researchers
 have found that the usage of
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, declines
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 period allocated for
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. in conclusion,
although
 the benefits of the
computer
 should not be undervalued,
such
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the
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youngsters to strengthen
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 knowledge better,
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 still believe that
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computers should not be used for
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 term and without the supervision of their parents.
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