In many countries schools have severe problems with student behavior. What do you think are the causes of this? What solutions can you suggest?
Nowadays,many
countries
schools have severe problems associated with students' Change noun form
countries'
country's
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behavior
.Change the spelling
behaviour
However
,the issue regarding Linking Words
childrens'
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children's
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behavior
has Change the spelling
behaviour
being
rising gradually and day by day it is getting worse.Change the verb form
been
This
issue occurs due to Linking Words
lack
of Correct article usage
a lack
self control
.Add a hyphen
self-control
Furthermore
,the world Linking Words
have
been globalized and made people addicted to Change the verb form
has
materialistic
world more than having bonds are caused for Add an article
the materialistic
a materialistic
the
most Correct article usage
apply
of
common Change preposition
apply
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behavior
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behaviour
issues
among Use synonyms
children
.
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Additionally
, the present modern lifestyle of Linking Words
parents
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also
effected to Linking Words
child
's Use synonyms
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behavior
.Change the spelling
behaviour
For example
,the bond between Linking Words
parents
and Use synonyms
children
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are
an important role Change the verb form
is
of
a Change preposition
in
child
's life. Use synonyms
Majority
of Correct article usage
The majority
children
are aggressive due to Use synonyms
a
loneliness. They do not have anyone to listen Remove the article
apply
or
to be with them when they needed. Most of the Change preposition
to or
children
show some hyperactive Use synonyms
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behavior
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behaviour
issues
due to Use synonyms
lack
of attention.Not only Correct article usage
a lack
the
relationshipsCorrect article usage
apply
,
but Remove the comma
apply
also
the technology Linking Words
effect
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affect
childrens'
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children's
Use synonyms
behavior
. Inappropriate social media platforms,video games and unwanted relationships are some causes that, influence Change the spelling
behaviour
children
with bad habitats.
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Firstly
, the school should associate with the Linking Words
parents
to find a solution regarding the Use synonyms
issues
which, Use synonyms
influenced
by Add a missing verb
are influenced
the
peers.Change the word
their
Secondly
, Linking Words
parents
should concern Use synonyms
on
their Change preposition
about
child
's Use synonyms
Use synonyms
behavior
and they should put on their concentration over kids.Change the spelling
behaviour
Parents
should make them feel like friends.Use synonyms
For example
,once the Linking Words
child
Use synonyms
feel
their Change the verb form
feels
parents
,Use synonyms
children
will open up their selves to Use synonyms
Use synonyms
parents
. Correct pronoun usage
their parents
Finally
,Linking Words
children
should Use synonyms
addicted
to Change the verb form
be addicted
addict
choose
the correct path Wrong verb form
choosing
of
their lives.They should learn to use the technology in a correct manner.
To summarize, the Change preposition
in
issues
with Use synonyms
Use synonyms
behavior
can be solved by the school and Change the spelling
behaviour
parents
. Use synonyms
Therefore
,adults in societyLinking Words
,
should navigate to the correct path through their Remove the comma
apply
self confidence
.Add a hyphen
self-confidence
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