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some people think that the main factors influencing a child's development these days are things such as TV friends and music others believe that the family Still Remains more important discuss both opinions and give your opinion

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some people assume that the principle affects on kids progress nowadays are :TV friends and music ‚in other side ‚others see the family has its own place in children lives. children have good connection with technology
for instance
: TV which makes them live in other  planets ‚and enjoying with images and colors that teach them many things ‚music
also
 has a big impact on them especially  the lyrics and Melody ‚ makigfriends and new relations allow them to learn about life experiences ‚and how to handle with others‚ kids are like biscuits you can form them in any shape you want‚ because they adapt faster than the adult  
Besides
 others think that family is the power of children life‚ without being social with your family you feel lonely
for example
: sometimes we have a lot of things in our hearts to express and the only people who can help you are the members of your family‚ sitting with them cultivate tranquility in your soul .
Moreover
‚ the advices you can get from a family you won't find them in other people.  Despite the joy that we find in TV music and with friends‚ family will stay the main nerve for the continuity of life .In my opinion‚ kids stay healthy with family environment‚ because it makes them feel more comfortable and happy‚
in addition
 to
this
 ‚their personality will be stronger and they will grow in clever way.
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