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In some countries married couples plan to have a baby at a later age due to the demands of their professional career. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of it and give your opinion

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Family planning plays an important role in our society without planning today's youngster does not see their
age
 of getting married and having a
baby
. It is very important to have a proper
plan
 for their life. The rapid growth of lifestyle and newborn babies are growing day by day. In a country like India, people get married and within a month they start with their family
plan
 without being independent and without any responsibility. Contrasting other countries they
plan
 with a proper
plan
 and after being independent within 3 or 4 years they conceive a
baby
. The major advantage of having a
baby
 later is that the growth and success of their career are the biggest roles in their life. They
plan
 as they get a good position and achieve their professional career. They
also
 have a mentality of having a
baby
 late and
then
 spend their most of the time with them so that they spend quality time with them. Lately having a
baby
an
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 earlier
age
 will not benefit them as they are in
their
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 in to grow
age
 phase. The disadvantages of these are if couples conceive early it will be very difficult for them to handle their lifestyle and managing schedule without any discussion. It is not only important for them to follow their dreams but
also
 to be mature enough to handle the situation. Conceiving late will
also
 gives problems for women. After 30 the body functions get slow and may have some complications while conceiving a
baby
. It is better to have a
baby
 in the proper time period. Earlier women used to reproduce many children as they did not have any proper knowledge about family planning but now because of the new technology they have now
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proper knowledge
at
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 what
age
 should they get married and at what
age
 should they conceive. One incident in my family
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happened my aunt was busy making her career and she planned to conceive after 30. She tried later the results were negative because it was not possible for a
baby
 to stay in a womb. She had other complications while conceiving a
baby
. I would strongly recommend that one should do
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proper planning for their future along with their personal choice they should not force each other to conceive.
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