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You have found out that a building company is planning to build new houses close to your home. Write a letter to the manager of the construction company. In your letter say • how you found out about their plan • describe how you feel about the proposed development • explain what you hope the building company will do

#company #houses #home #manager #construction #plan #development #hope
Dear sir I am writing
this
 letter in order to express my concern about your latest project that your company is planning to start name is Highway Skyscraper I am a resident
in
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 Konak Avenue and read an advertisement
at
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local
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the local
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 newspaper about Highway Scraper which you will start in one month. I believe in that you have already realised our district lack
about
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some facilities
such
 as
super market
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supermarket
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 and
beauty
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a beauty
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center
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. We have to drive 30 minutes for our daily needs. I hope, you will consider in your project these.
In addition
, I am a bit anxious about you might cause
traffic
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 jam, since our street is not big enough
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 many cars. As I am
engineer
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an engineer
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 I know many construction cars will work in
construction
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the construction
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 area and of
course
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,course
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 they will use
main
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 road
therefor
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therefore
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 we will face some traffic
problem
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. I hope, you will have
solution
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a solution
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with
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 that problem Yours faithfully Tufan Altay Dogan
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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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