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You share a parking area with several neighbours and have recently started having problems. Write a letter to be copied to all neighbours that share the parking area. In that letter • explaining the problems • suggesting ways to help the situation • proposing a possible meeting You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear Neighbours,

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Dear Neighbours, I am writing to tell you about the issues that I have experienced for two weeks while using the parking.
To begin
 with, I found that some kittens chose the entry of the parking as their house so we have to be more careful to avoid fatal accidents.
Besides
, I have noticed that some unfamiliar cars
started
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 take a place in our area. In my opinion, we have to decide together what should we do in order to find solutions to these problems and I would like to arrange an offline meeting on Saturday at 10 am. Participation of every person is significantly important so do not be indifferent.
First
 of all, we have to relocate the kittens’ place to the safer one.
Second
, we need to decide how to prevent other cars
intervening
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 in our parking area. For that reason, we are going to discuss the necessity of buying CCTV and imposing taxes on strangers. I hope that you would find some time to take a part in a meeting. I look forward to hearing from you. Yours faithfully, Eva Tritenko
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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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