You share a parking area with several neighbours and have recently started having problems. Write a letter to be copied to all neighbours that share the parking area. In that letter • explaining the problems • suggesting ways to help the situation • proposing a possible meeting You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear Neighbours,

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Dear Neighbours, I am writing to tell you about the issues that I have experienced for two weeks while using the parking.

To begin

with, I found that some kittens chose the entry of the parking as their house so we have to be more careful to avoid fatal accidents.

Besides

, I have noticed that some unfamiliar cars

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take a place in our area. In my opinion, we have to decide together what should we do in order to find solutions to these problems and I would like to arrange an offline meeting on Saturday at 10 am. Participation of every person is significantly important so do not be indifferent.

First

of all, we have to relocate the kittens’ place to the safer one.

Second

, we need to decide how to prevent other cars

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in our parking area. For that reason, we are going to discuss the necessity of buying CCTV and imposing taxes on strangers. I hope that you would find some time to take a part in a meeting. I look forward to hearing from you. Yours faithfully, Eva Tritenko

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Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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4Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
2Grammar mistakes
 

7 paragraphs

184 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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