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Some childern spend hours every day on their smartphones. why is this case?Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

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It seems that
smartphones
 are used a lot during the day by some youngsters.Despite the fact that in the modern era nobody can live without
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technology,I feel it should be controlled by parents to not exceeds.
This
 essay would discuss both positive and negative attitudes in the following. Some experts claim that using technology
such
 as
smartphones
 can cause positive effects on
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children
.They can learn new information and improve their knowledge from the internet.
In addition
,they are able to know more about life.
Moreover
,they can chat with
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 friends
in
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 social networking and communicate with new individuals ,
hence
 they find more friends.The
children
 can use
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smartphones
 as a device to play games in their free time ,in which some of the games are useful to improve their skills.
For instance
,there is a game names piano ,which can learn you how to play the piano in a simple method.
On the other hand
,some researches indicate
smartphones
 can impact
children
's brain.
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smartphones
 always send and receive signals,which can lead to influence
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children
.
Moreover
,
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 doctors believe that
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children
 using
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smartphones
 a lot of times have eye problems.
Furthermore
,they may waste their time and see unrelated things on it.
In addition
, parents say that
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smartphones
 have some effects on their mental.
For example
, there was a child being depressed as he used it a lot. To conclude, today
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children
 may use
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smartphones
 for many hours.
However
,
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it
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can be harmful
for
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 their health both physically and mentally.
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