There is an increasing number of juvenile delinquents . Analyse the possible causes that give rise to this phenomenon and offer some feasible recommendations.

Criminal activities amongst
children
and teenagers
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becoming a very popular occurrence in many parts of the world today.
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a result of
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medial influence and
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problems.
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factors and how changing the
age
of criminal responsibility and rehabilitation programmes can alleviate
this
phenomenon. Most importantly, is the damning impact that platforms like
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,
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and Instagram have on
this
age
group.
Children
at
this
age
are susceptible to peer pressure and lack the maturity to fully comprehend the consequences of their actions.
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trends perpetuated by social medial influencers. A United
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2022 statistic revealed that
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children
who watch video games are more likely to engage in crime than those who do not, while those who join any social media platform before
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are twice likely to do
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than their counterparts who wait until the of 17 to join any social medial. Drug and drug abuse
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a high correlation to committing
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.
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illegal ways of sustaining supply like stealing. There is an urgent need for advocacy for increasing the
age
of criminal responsibility to above 17 in most countries.
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children
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up and
further
develop their interpretation of the outcome of their actions .
Consequently
,
this
eliminates the vulnerability of young
age
offenders
.
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, community rehabilitation and detention facilities can be positively used to support child
offenders
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better
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of themselves. Research shows that juvenile
offenders
are more likely to mature and outgrow their wrong start in life and become changed adults than adult
offenders
if they get supported during and after incarceration.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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