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Today, more and more people use robots to do tasks at home and at work. Do you think it is a positive or negative development?

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At present days, the utilization of
robots
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 is becoming prevalent in households
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 at the workplace. In my opinion, I believe that
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 trend brings more beneficial outcomes than negative ones. There are several drawbacks caused by the overwhelming use of
robots
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.
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, residents may become lazy because most of the
housework
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 is completed by automated machines.
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, floor-mopping machines have been so popular nowadays that the majority of Chinese families use them to clean and wash the floor.
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, when they are accustomed to
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, they would be unwilling to do
housework
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 on their own.
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, since
robots
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 can enormously improve productivity at the workplace, some of the employees will be made redundant and in turn, the unemployment rate
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. Despite the arguments mentioned above, I believe that we gain more benefits from
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. Marriage partners in modern society are always busy at work and feel so exhausted that they do not have time to finish
housework
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. With the help of household
robots
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, they no longer need to worry about the distribution of
housework
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, and sometimes
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 can even help to improve their relationships.
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, floor-mopping machines can automatically clean up the floor before the couple
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 home, which means that they have no need to argue with each other to decide who should do
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 tedious work.
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, as productivity is greatly enhanced, employers are able to make an increasing amount of profit and
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 money can be used to improve working conditions and increase salaries. In conclusion, we can see that
robots
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 have become popular at home and workplace nowadays, and I believe that the benefits of
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 outweigh its drawbacks.
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task response
Ensure that the introduction clearly states whether the trend of using robots is a positive or negative development to align with the opinion in the essay.
coherence and cohesion
Maintain a logical progression of ideas, linking sentences and paragraphs to better develop the arguments and examples.
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