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Some people believe that automation can help positively transform the economy. Others think otherwise, claiming that it may imply serious economic consequences. Dicuss both views and give your opinion.

#people #automation #economy #consequences #dicuss
People argue that
automation
 will enhance our economy while some believe that it will damage it. There is no doubt that
automation
 will have some effect on
existing
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 job market but it will give rise to entirely new industries. In my ,opinion
automation
 is the best innovation of mankind which will help in economic growth. In recent times we have seen how
the
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automation
 is everywhere, from the needle to
plane
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the plane
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 everything is connected to
automation
. Artificial
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intelligence
intellgence
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intelligence
 and machine learning
has
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 advanced so much that we have started replacing humans.
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 the Amazon warehouse in America which is said to be a few
kilometers
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 big has no human
employee
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employees
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. The warehouse is completely run by robots without requiring to stop.
This
 is just one example of
automation
 replacing humans.
However
,
automation
 is a boon to
economy
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the economy
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, as we are able to produce and sell more. In the study done by
Indian
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the Indian
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 Institute of Technology, during the unfortunate crisis of COVID 19 vast and fast production of covid vaccine helped not only save millions of
life
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 but helped
market
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the market
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 revive faster.
The computerization
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Computerization
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 has helped every industry grow to its full potential. We as humans have to collectively look ahead and give up the old ways of life. The new
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technologies
techonolgies
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technologies
 will help
human
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humans
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 to find medicine for
the
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apply
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diseases and help in space exploration etc. In conclusion, I strongly believe that
automation
 helps in
growth
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the growth
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 of
economy
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the economy
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 and will help build
a new industries
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a new industry
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. It will open new jobs avenue and market
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opportunities
oppurtunities
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opportunities
. We should focus on
long term
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long-term
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benefits
benifits
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benefits
 rather than looking at
short term
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short-term
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 gains.
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