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The self-driving cars is getting popular in the world. Do you agree or disagree?

#cars #world
•In our modern life, transportation has been proven to be a
revolution
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a
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 almost
every day
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everyday
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 type of industry and
also
this
 essay agrees that
,
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the
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self-driving
cars
 have
being
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 famous.
First
 of all,
this
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 transports are really comfortable and extremely easy to drive.
Second
 of all, those
cars
also
 never violate traffic rules and avoid accidents •On the one hand, nowadays the majority of inhabitants use the self-driving automobile
instead
 of
regularly
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cars
 because
this
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 transports are exceedingly
comfort
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 and
also
 If
people
 do not know how to drive
cars
, these
cars
 are very convenient for them because these
cars
 are not driven by humans. 
For example
, my
mom
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 workplace is far away, so my dad gave my mother a self-driving car for her birthday, and I hope it was not difficult for her to drive
this
 car. •
On the other hand
, The most beneficial part of the fact that self-driving
cars
 are widely used by
people
 is that there are
less
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 traffic jams and fewer accidents, and
people
 are very few
accidentslives
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accidents lives
 are saved because these
cars
 follow the rules of the road and never violate the rules of the road.
For example
, in my city, many
people
 prefer to use self-driving
cars
, and many
people
 are using them, and nowadays there are very few accidents on the roads, and I think
that is
 the best part of these
cars
. •In conclusion,
people
 should use a lot of small controlled machines because it is not only useful for
people
's
life
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 but
also
 very useful for the country.
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