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You share your room with another student in the college hostel. You find it very difficult to study there because he or She always has parties and friends visiting. write a letter to the hostel warden complaining about your displeasure with the roommate.

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Dear Mrs Walia, I am one of the students living in room no. 617 on a twin-sharing basis at the college hostel. I am writing
this
 letter to inform you that I am very disturbed by the behaviour of my roommate which does not allow me to focus on my studies. She is a
first
-year student and I am in my final year. She often listens to loud music and almost every day she calls her friends to our room and they spent most of the time partying and enjoying. I have requested her many times to cooperate and set a timeline for enjoyment and studies. But she never agrees to my opinion and ignore all my requests. I am very disappointed with her carelessness.
Therefore
, I request you please adjust me to any other student in the hostel. I am really afraid as the exams are near and I am losing my study skills due to her inappropriate behaviour. Yours faithfully, Sneha
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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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