In some parts of the world traditional festivals and celebrations have disappeared or are disappearing. What problems is this causing? What measures could be taken to counter this situation?
Today's lifestyle has modified to
busy
lifestyle.Add an article
a busy
As a result
of that
traditional Correct determiner usage
apply
festivals
and celebrations have vanished in some parts of the world. This
essay will carefully examine the several reasons
for this
case and the several actions could
be taken to Correct pronoun usage
that could
this
case in the following paragraphs.
There are many possible reasons
for this
situation. For example
, busy
life schedule might be a reason. Everyone has a busy Correct article usage
a busy
Correct your spelling
lifestyle
life style
, so they don't have Correct your spelling
lifestyle
a
enough time to spend their traditional Remove the article
apply
festivals
. For instance
, in the
Correct article usage
apply
sri
Change the capitalization
Sri
lanka
Change the capitalization
Lanka
ramazan
, Change the capitalization
Ramazan
depavali
and easter Correct your spelling
Deepavali
friday
are not commercial holidays. These are only public holidays.So those who Change the capitalization
Friday
working
in Change the form of the verb
work
private
sector , Add an article
the private
they
need to get a holiday or Correct pronoun usage
apply
Correct your spelling
half-day
half day
halfday
work. Because of Correct your spelling
half-day
that
they don't have Add a comma
,that
much
times to prepare for Change the quantifier
many
festivals
. Another reason, new generations
are not interest
Wrong verb form
interested
to
Change preposition
in
festivals
. They are trying Correct your spelling
to
ti
relax or go out with their friends Correct your spelling
to
in
these Change preposition
during
festivals
holidays. And so we see Change the noun form
festival
that
types of possible Correct determiner usage
the
reasons
of
Change preposition
for
this
situation.
There are many solutions that could be taken for this
situations
. Fix the agreement mistake
situation
For example
to give the knowledge and experience to current generations
about our festival celebration. As a result
, new generations
might be aware about
the celebration Change the preposition
of
then
they will pass to future generations
. Additionally
, another moving way is that use the media to Correct your spelling
motivate
motivated
motivat
individuals Correct your spelling
motivate
for
Change preposition
to
celebration
. Replace the word
celebrate
Then
, they will prepare the festival before
a week. we see Change preposition
for
also
many solutions could
be taken to Correct pronoun usage
that could
this
situations
.
We saw from the above how the lifestyle has Fix the agreement mistake
situation
modified
. we Add a missing verb
been modified
also
saw that
how vanished the festival in some parts of the world. In conclusion, we could say thatCorrect word choice
apply
,
the Remove the comma
apply
reasons
and the actions could
be taken is as Correct pronoun usage
that could
outline
above.Wrong verb form
outlined
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