In some parts of the world traditional festivals and celebrations have disappeared or are disappearing. What problems is this causing? What measures could be taken to counter this situation?

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lifestyle.
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traditional
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and celebrations have vanished in some parts of the world.
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life schedule might be a reason. Everyone has a busy
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, so they don't have
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enough time to spend their traditional
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Deepavali
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are not commercial holidays. These are only public holidays.So those who
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sector ,
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need to get a holiday or
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they don't have
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times to prepare for
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festivals
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relax or go out with their friends
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these
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festivals
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holidays. And so we see
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about our festival celebration.
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the celebration
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celebration
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how vanished the festival in some parts of the world. In conclusion, we could say that
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the
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • traditional festivals
  • heritage
  • cultural identity
  • folklore
  • cultural tourism
  • intergenerational
  • homogenization
  • commercialization
  • intangible cultural heritage
  • community engagement
  • awareness
  • revitalize
  • cultural diversity
  • educational programs
  • governmental support
  • logistical support
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