A friend of yours called Amin gave a party yesterday, which you enjoyed. Write a letter to Amin. In your letter, you should Thank you him for the party Say what you liked best Suggest when you could gather again.

I am Farangiz. I am writing to thank
to
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my best friend, Amin, for him yesterday. Well, I enjoyed
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at
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your
party
.
Firstly
, there can be no doubt that I say
that
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thank,
yoy
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you
invited me to your
party
.
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,
secondly
, I liked
it
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what occurred
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the fresh air. There was everything there.
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, delicious foods, mineral drinks, and other advantages.
Finally
, I mainly liked performed
musics
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music
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at your
party
.
In addition
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, there were a lot of our friends there.
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, we danced , talked , and ate.
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, we had a good time. I agree that we will accumulate again the
next
week Friday. I hope that I will organize
party
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a party
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again. Thank you for your attention. Yours sincerely,
Farangiz
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Farang
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