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In some countries allow old people to work to any age that they want. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

#countries #people #work #age
Many countries allow aged
people
 to
work
to
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 any
age
 that
want
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.
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,
people
 have
less
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 issues
of
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with
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 health,
they
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and they
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active
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are active
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 in
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their golden-year
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golden-year
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. So, there are
few
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 advantages
of
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for
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people
 who
work
 in old
age
.
However
, there
are
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also
 some
drawback
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drawbacks
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of
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this
 view.
therefore
, I will discuss
Pors
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the Pors
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 and Cons of
ensing
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ensuing
using
 paragraphs. To being with, there are several advantages of
people
work
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working
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at
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in
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 old
age
.
First
 and foremost, Nowadays, health issues
has
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have
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 been increased and
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people
poople
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people
 don't have enough strength to do
work
.
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Therefore
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Therefore
, many counties
such
 as Japan,
America
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and America
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that
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apply
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makes law
People
do
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work
at
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in
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 old
age
. Because, if
people
 who
work
 at above
age
 60 that they will not
suffered
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suffer
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 in health Problem.
For example
, The survey by
Times
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the Times
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 of India that
people
 who
work
in
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 the
age
 of 60 or above. they would not
suffered
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suffer
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in
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from
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 mental
disease
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diseases
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because
becaus
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because
 their mind
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involved
invaded
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were involed
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involed
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involved
 in their
work
.
Moreover
, The
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government
goverment
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government
also
 promoted
that
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People
 who aged and they give
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benefits
benifites
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benefits
.
On the other hand
, there are
also
 some drawbacks
of
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people
 who
work
at
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 their sixties.
Firstly
, old aged
people
have
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do have
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 not enough strength as compared to youngsters. They do not do
physically
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work
 like, managing construction
site
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sites
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,
working
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or working
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 in factories.
Besides
, the aged
people
not
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do not
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 easily grasp technology that they believe
work
 hard
by
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apply
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physical
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physically
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 but they don't think
work
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working
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 hard
by
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apply
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smartly with technology.
For instance
, the company survey with the experiment. The company divided the employers
in
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into
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 two groups
which
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one is younger
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employees
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employes
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employees
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the
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apply
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age
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aged
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 between 20-45 years and
second
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the second
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one
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ones
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is
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apply
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above 50
year
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years
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 and
companies
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the companies
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 gave
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the task
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task
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tasks
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 to two groups every group was provided
some
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with some
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 technical equipment.
As a result
, the group of ages between 20-45 years worked well as compared with another group. In conclusion,
people
 have
also
right
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the right
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 to
work
 that they can do at any
age
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therefore
therfore
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therefore
, they live
healthier
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a healthier
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life
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lives
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at
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in
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 their golden
age
.
However
, aged
people
 don't
do
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apply
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work
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faster then
faster than
fasterthen
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faster than
 younger. In my point of view
disadvantages
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the disadvantages
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 are more than
advantages
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the advantages
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.
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