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Newspapers have influenced people's idea and opinions. What are the reason for this? Is this a positive or a nagative devlopment?

#newspapers #people #idea #reason #nagative #devlopment
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facebook
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applications of
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that influenced
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people's
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the people's
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 ideas and opinions.
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the newspaper
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. To being with, there are several
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reasons
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reasons
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People
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 influenced by
newspapers
 rather than other
media
.
Firstly
,
newspapers
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media
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 30% or more
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people
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 of
media
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In addition
, there are
also
 some positive effects of
newspapers
.
First
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people
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newspapers
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instead
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opportunities
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 some policy of press for influenced
newspapers
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Furthermore
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newspapers
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people
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opinion
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opinions
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 because
this
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 right or accurate, rather than other
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media
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.
For instance
, nowadays many
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 of saw
information
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world
such
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reddit
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contrary
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, many
people
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people
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a journalist
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journalists
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. In Conclusion, there
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are many
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are many
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effects
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effects
 of
newspapers
. It
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 accurate
information
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world
. Which leads
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 being more than cons.
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