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Some People believe that the best way to reduce commuting time is to replace parks and gardens near the city center with commuter apartment building, but other disagree. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

#people #time #parks #gardens #city #center #commuter #apartment
Nowadays,
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traffic
issues
has
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have
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 been spread in
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developed
devloped
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developed
 or
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developing
devloping
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developing
 cities.
Moreover
,
people
's have not more time
of
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travelling.
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Therefore
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Therefore
, some
people
 think that
reduce
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 travelling time is to
refurbishment
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the refurbishment
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 of
parks
 and
gardens
 near the
city
center
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centre
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 convent to the
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residential
residencial
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residential
 area. While other
people
 are against
this
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viewpoint
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view point
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viewpoint
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.
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Therefore
, I will discuss both points of view and give my opinion on
this
 matter. There are several advantages of convent
Parks
 and
gardens
 to the
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residential
residencial
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residential
 area.
The
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first
 and foremost, the traffic
issues
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 been declined to construct building or apartment near
city
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the city
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center
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centre
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.
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main
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advantages
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 of
is
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fule
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fuel
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 consumption might be less
the
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because
people
 have less commuting so, carbon dioxide emission has been reduced.
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 the
results
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,
the
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air pollution
is
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might be declined.
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,
government
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the government
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 should less invest
on
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 public transportation
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therefore
therfore
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therefore
,they saved money.
For example
,
Indian
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 government spend around 20 per cent of total expenditures. So, replace to
gardens
 and
parks
 to the
residencial
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residential
 that money can invest
which
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 specific needs of
people
 who suffered in other serious situations.
On the other hand
, these days Pollution has been increasing in the urban areas so, urban areas
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required
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reduired
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reduced
 to greens. Trees and Plants are very essential because
,
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 they absorb Carbon dioxide and give fresh oxygen.
Furthermore
, If
gardens
 and
parks
 are removed
to
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 the
city
 side that children have
not
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no
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 spaces to play.
Moreover
,
People
 have
balance
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a balance
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 in
the
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their
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 life that
worklife
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work life
or
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and
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 health . When
gardens
 and
parks
refurbished
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are refurbished
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. they have not
doing
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done
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 leisure
activity
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activities
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 like exercise, yoga and quality time of their own. In conclusion, the benefits of
replace
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 to
parks
 and
gardens
to
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with
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 high-rise
building
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buildings
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 near
to
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the
city
center
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centre
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. It would reduce traffic
issues
. While, when removes
parks
 and
gardens
 that pollution has been rose.
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,
people
suffered
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in
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a
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health
issues
such
 as blood pressure, cancer and breathing problems
are
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also
 increased.
However
, my opinion is that
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later
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latter
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 view because it is more beneficial for
people
's life
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