Schools are no longer necessary because children can learn so much from the internet and be educated at home. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Nowadays,
internet
has been spreading in the world and life Add an article
the internet
being
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is
on
the palm of our hands. Change preposition
in
Therefore
, some people think that children
can learn more the
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on the
internet
rather than schools
or colleges. Education Change preposition
in schools
centre
like schools or colleges Fix the agreement mistake
centres
not
necessary. I voted against Add a missing verb
are not
such
a viewpoint to a large extent. My preference is explained in the ensuing paragraphs.
To begin
with, there are many disadvantages of
learning Change preposition
to
to
the Change preposition
on
internet
. First
and foremost, if Correct your spelling
children
childrens
learn through Correct your spelling
children
internet
that they could be less Add an article
the internet
socialize
. Replace the word
social
Besides
, they do not know how to make friends and how to
communicate with people. The interaction with teachers Fix the infinitive
apply
it
may Correct pronoun usage
apply
less
. Add a missing verb
be less
In
the Change preposition
As
results
, Fix the agreement mistake
result
students
and Change noun form
students'
student's
teachers
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teachers'
teacher's
relation
might be Fix the agreement mistake
relations
disrespect
. Replace the word
disrespectful
Moreover
, some subject
can not teach on the Fix the agreement mistake
subjects
internet
such
as drawing, sports
. These subjects teach only physically.
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and sports
In addition
, in 2019, pandemic time schools and colleges had
closed. So, Unnecessary verb
apply
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children
childrens
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children
had
learnt and attend online classes. The survey of times of Unnecessary verb
apply
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in these years saw many eye Change the capitalization
India
disease
in Fix the agreement mistake
diseases
children
health which is refractive errors, Change noun form
children's
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age-related
age related
macular degeneration, cataract and many more. Add a hyphen
age-related
Furthermore
every Add a comma
,Furthermore
children
have not Change to a singular noun
child
same
grasping power to understand through Correct article usage
the same
internet
so, they need to learn physical classes.
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the internet
On the other hand
, The internet
has been make
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making
made
world
. Smallest Every information available on the Add an article
the world
a world
internet
. When children
work at home that
they have some quarry or Correct pronoun usage
apply
Problem
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Problems
about
their work. They can easily solve with help of Change preposition
with
internet
. They can not wait Correct article usage
the internet
for
ask their teachers to Change preposition
to
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solve
slove
the problem. Correct your spelling
solve
Moreover
, they get also
lot
of other information Change the article
a lot
for
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from
this
knowledge.
In conclusion, these day
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days
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internet
internt
has been part of our life without Correct your spelling
internet
internet
we can not get information over the world. My explanation Correct article usage
the internet
convey
that in the education system Physical teaching has more Change the verb form
conveys
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beneficial
benifical
rather than the Correct your spelling
beneficial
internet
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