More and more people are becoming seriously overweight.Some People say that the price increase of fattening food will solve this problem. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Nowadays,
People
suffering Obesity
which is one of the Serious Change preposition
from Obesity
problem
for individuals. while some Change to a plural noun
problems
people
argue that government
should increase price
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the price
on
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of
fast-
food
. Other
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,
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are
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is
another
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other
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alternate
step
forward and implement more actions. I agree Fix the agreement mistake
steps
such
a viewpoint to Change preposition
with such
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large
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extent. My preference is explained in the ensuing paragraphs.
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large
To begin
with, there are many reasons people
use to eat fast-
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fast food
food
because,
it is very delicious which is Remove the comma
apply
also
easy to prepare and it also
chaper
rather than Correct your spelling
chapter
cheaper
health
or nutrition Replace the word
healthy
food
. As a result
, people
have been suffering Change preposition
from disease
disease
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diseases
such
as obesity, diabetes and heart issues. However
, the solution is a
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the
government
should take action on this
problems
. The Fix the agreement mistake
problem
price
increase of junk food
. So, everyone can not afford it
high Correct pronoun usage
apply
price
food
. therefore
, people
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moving
the
healthy Correct article usage
apply
food
. Moreover
, government
should Add an article
the government
also
make laws. For instance
, the British government
recommend eating five portions of fruits and vegetables per day.
Furthermore
, school
curriculum should Correct article usage
the school
banned
unhealthy junk Change the verb form
ban
food
on manus
becauseCorrect your spelling
menus
,
these days child has been Remove the comma
apply
also
suffer
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suffering
suffered
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overweight
over weight
. Correct your spelling
overweight
In addition
, we need to re-educate society and show them how exercise and healthy food
can reduce Change the pronoun
their
them
weight.
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the
On the contrary
, government
should rising taxes on Add an article
the government
fast-
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fast food
food
instead
of people
who business
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are business
on
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in
fast-
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a fast-food
the fast-food
food
company
which might be Fix the agreement mistake
companies
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loss
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, fast-
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a fast-food
food
company
like KFC and McDonald's might be Fix the agreement mistake
companies
loss
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lost
price
would increase becauseAdd an article
the price
,
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apply
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everyone
evryone
can not afford high prices. Correct your spelling
everyone
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, it should not provide policy in urban areas becauseChange preposition
of, people
,
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apply
people
who live in Correct article usage
the people
city
. They are very rich so Add an article
the city
a city
that
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the
price
of fast-
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fast food
food
doesn't affect them.
In conclusion, as far as I can see, I don't think so, more than 30% people
continue to eat unhealthy meals because of the inflation and Change preposition
of people
government
should rise taxes so, it is very expensive to
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for
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common
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