Should the international community do more to tackle the threat of global warming? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant example from your own knowledge or experience.

Nowadays, the global warming issue has spread over the world.
Therefore
, the international
community
should respond to take action on these problems. There are many reasons global warming has spread over the world. I will give the reasons and solutions to
this
situation in the ensuing paragraphs.
To begin
with, there are many reasons for increased global warming.
Firstly
, the main reason is a forest has been destroyed by humans, they built high-rise buildings and factories replaced the forest. The forest becomes a concrete jungle.
Secondly
, these days everyone has an individual vehicle.
Therefore
, air pollution has been spread.
As a result
, oxygen is decreased and carbon dioxide is increased in the atmosphere. The solution to maintaining global warming in the atmosphere which international
community
should make laws for people who construct skyscrapers that are fine for cutting the trees.
Moreover
, the international
community
should not have permission to destroy forests and make houses.
In addition
, the international
community
and national
community
also
make laws to decline air pollution.
For example
, the Indian government promote electric vehicles because people less consume fuel and decline air pollution. In conclusion, it is the biggest problem in the world. So, the international
community
and national communities meet mutually create laws to decrease global warming issues.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • global warming
  • threat
  • international community
  • tackle
  • pressing issue
  • global collaboration
  • action
  • cooperation
  • root causes
  • neglecting
  • responsibility
  • catastrophic consequences
  • efforts
  • combat
  • inspiration
  • further action
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