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Many governments think that economic progress is their most important goal. Some people, however, think that other types of progress are equally important for a country. Discuss both these views and give your own opinio

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The table illustrates the largest
number
 of people in ten nations worldwide between 2019 and a forecast for 2100.

 Overall, the total
number
 of residents in India, USA, Pakistan, Indonesia, Nigeria, D.R. Congo, Ethiopia, and Tanzania will exhibit upward trends, whereas other countries, including China, Brazil, Bangladesh, Russia, and Mexico will show declines. 
 Indians are projected to take over Chinese citizens and become the highest figure throughout the world, with 1551
million
. Nigeria,
moreover
, is estimated to see the greatest difference, over three times the population, from 206 to 730
million
. It is worth noting that Bangladesh, Russia, and Mexico are projected to be ranked out of ten by 2100. The population in China took the lead, with 1439
million
 in 2019, which was the highest
number
 in the ten countries;
however
, it is predicted to drop dramatically to only 941
million
, ranked
second
.
Likewise
, the
number
 of residents in Brazil was 221
million
, while it is expected to change to the lowest in the top 10 nations, falling to 177
million
. It can be seen that the ranking in Pakistan is predicted to remain the same, with the population standing at 221 in 2019 and going up to 316 in 2100.
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