Some feel that cities shold be designed to be beautiful while others feel their functionality is more important. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.
With the increase in the populace, urbanization is developing day by day. Some folk
claim
that urban areas should look beautiful while others claim
that it is better to be more facilities for people
in these areas rather than focus on looks. Personally, I believe that cities
' functionality is more important than only focusing on looks. I will discuss both views and will share my opinion in upcoming paragraphs.
To begin
with, the claim
of attractive designs is that they will attract tourists. More people
will come to visit these cities
owing to the attractive looks of these cities
. To illustrate, Dubai is eminent for its attractive looks because of Burj Khalifa and due to its attractive ,look many tourists from different countries come to visit this
place. Moreover
, the attractiveness of the cities
enhances the economy of the country. The more the place is beautiful and attractive, the more people
come to visit. In this
way, the finance of the country boosts.
People
who claim
to focus on cities
' functionality are more important as it will be an extra cost and funds on the government if the money
is spent on modifying and attractive looks of cities
. To make these urban areas beautiful, the government needs to spend money
which is a waste of money
as it should be spent on facilities. Furthermore
, it is people
's money
so it should be spent on people
to make their life easier as people
pay large amounts of money
in taxes. For example
, health and education should be free or less costly for people
who can't afford to owe to their low income.
To conclude, no doubt an attractive look is necessary, however
, more focussed should be on its functions rather than its looks. In my opinion, looks matter but functions are more important than only attractiveness as these make people
's life easier and smoother.Submitted by gurbir0309 on
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite
