The best way to solve the world’s environmental problem is to increase the price of fuel. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

There is a controversial perspective heating up a debate

whether

Change preposition

on whether

show examples

a hike applied in

petroleum’s

Change noun form

petroleum

show examples

Use synonyms

price

Fix the agreement mistake

prices

show examples

plays an optimal role in addressing

the

Correct article usage

apply

show examples

cross-bordered pollution. In my opinion, I would not consider myself an advocate of

this

Linking Words

notion. Without a shadow of a doubt, increasing the

price

Use synonyms

of conventional energy sources is not the best tactic to deal with deterioration in environmental quality. Almost all

vehicles

Use synonyms

run on

fuel

Use synonyms

, so there is an inelastic demand for using it. Even if the

price

Use synonyms

of gas heavily goes up, residents still have a requirement to buy it.

For example

Linking Words

, even though the Vietnamese government has just accelerated the

price

Use synonyms

of gasoline, inhabitants here who had the demand to go to work and study still greatly flock to buy petrol. The rise in

fuel

Use synonyms

prices will not only reduce the number of

vehicles

Use synonyms

used but

also

Linking Words

cause heavy environmental degradation.

Hence

Linking Words

, growing

fuel

Use synonyms

prices is not the most effective way to protect the surroundings. While

an

Correct article usage

the

show examples

ineffective impact of the climb in

the

Correct article usage

apply

show examples

Use synonyms

fuel’s

Change noun form

fuel

show examples

Use synonyms

price

Fix the agreement mistake

prices

show examples

is widely acknowledged, there is a wealth of more far-reaching alternatives to tackle environmental issues. At

this

Linking Words

time, there is a myriad of electric

vehicles

Use synonyms

which run on renewable power

do

Correct pronoun usage

that do

show examples

not seriously affect the air quality of the environment.

For instance

Linking Words

, Vinfast, which is a famous car-make in Vietnam, has a system of bio-friendly electric hybrid

vehicles

Use synonyms

. It not only meets the ever-growing demand of moving

of

Change preposition

apply

show examples

dwellers but

also

Linking Words

does not alarmingly affect the environment.

Therefore

Linking Words

, the

utilize

Replace the word

utilisation

show examples

of

battery operated

Add a hyphen

battery-operated

show examples

vehicles

Use synonyms

is one of the most effective means to reduce greenhouse gas emissions, which can protect the world. In my conclusion, raising

fuel

Use synonyms

prices can not confront the urgent problem of the global environment.

Instead

Linking Words

, the governors should encourage citizens to make use of electric

vehicles

Use synonyms

more to reduce

the

Correct article usage

apply

show examples

environmental contamination.