You were doing a short course at another country. However, you had to leave the course unexpectedly to fly back home. Write a letter to your teacher. In your letter explain why you had to leave describe which part of the course you enjoyed most thank your teacher for the course

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Dear Sir or Madam, I regret to inform you that I am forced to stop my training because of a few problems. The primary reason why I have to leave the course is that my father has gotten a disease and he needs to be cared for by anyone else because he is bedridden.

Moreover

,my mother is working,

therefore

,she can not look after him. I would like to point out that the course was very interesting,especially the organisations with other course members were unmemorable because I made friends during these collaborations.All of them were well-organised by your assistants. I am unable to thank you for your kind and hospitable approach.Despite hating the training in the middle,I learned a lot of real experience

that is

in line with my profession.

Furthermore

,it had a tremendous impact on me in terms of improving my practical skills. Thank you for your help and support. Yours faithfully Malik Maliki.

Submitted by malikli.malik1995 on Tue Nov 29 2022

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