A country becomes more interesting and develops more quickly when its population includes a mixture of nationalities. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
I
am agree
with a Change the verb form
agree
mixture
of nationalities Use synonyms
bring
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brings
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more
mor
development and becomes Correct your spelling
more
more
interesting country. Correct article usage
a more
People
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brings
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bring
wideariet
of Correct your spelling
wearied
workforce
and Add an article
the workforce
teaches
about other Correct subject-verb agreement
teach
cultures
.
There are many talented Use synonyms
people
in Use synonyms
this
world. they have Linking Words
specific
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the specific
a specific
skill
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skills
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in
culture
which is connected with their territory. When Use synonyms
people
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are migrate
they Change the verb form
migrate
also
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skills
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the skills
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that place and Change preposition
from
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forward
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to Correct your spelling
forward
new
territory and teach new Correct article usage
a new
people
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india
we have Change the capitalization
India
largest
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the largest
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number
cultures
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people
can mix Use synonyms
each
other and spread their skills to Change preposition
with each
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makes
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culture
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cultures
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helpful
helpfull
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helpful
develope
. like in Correct your spelling
develop
mumbai
where all major community is resides there. Change the capitalization
Mumbai
gujarati
, marwadi, Change the capitalization
Gujarati
Gujarat
sindhi
, Change the capitalization
Sindhi
punjabi
and Change the capitalization
Punjabi
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Christian
chritian
etc. Correct your spelling
Christian
they
bring more contributionscontributin to Correct pronoun usage
apply
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develop
develope
that area and it can force Correct your spelling
develop
to
grow faster than Correct pronoun usage
it to
single
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a single
culture
society. we can show Use synonyms
different
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a different
type
of Fix the agreement mistake
types
architarures
different types of food and festivals. it becomes more interesting with Correct your spelling
architectures
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differences
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the defferences
defferences
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differences
of
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between
people
. they develop faster with Use synonyms
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mixture
of business ideas and different Add an article
a mixture
business
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businesses
that
area.
It has minor Change preposition
in that
disadvantage
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disadvantages
also
. with Linking Words
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mixture
of Add an article
a mixture
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nationality
nationalities
nationalitiy
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nationalities
perticuler
region can be affected by their heritage. or it may Correct your spelling
particular
also
happen that after a several Linking Words
period
of time that a several Change to a plural noun
periods
period
of time that regional Change to a plural noun
periods
culture
and heritage can be losing power Use synonyms
by
time.
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over
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cultures
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