Nowadays robbery and theift are growing problems in many big cities.Give causes and solution?

At
this
time, petty crimes
such
as robbery and theft are developing in megacities due to the high rent of apartments and living costs ,especially in modern and state-of-art towns with numerous skyscrapers and high-rise buildings. In
this
article, I would discuss the causes and how to tackle and address these issues.
First
and foremost, entrepreneurship has been claimed as a major driver of economic growth in metropolitan cities and can reduce the rate of unemployment in mother countries
such
as the united states and western regions. One of the causes of
this
issue is unemployment, If people lose their work, they will not pay their apartment rent and can not find accommodation at a reasonable price. Bad working environments and
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minimum wages can have
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impact on blue collars mental health.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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