Some people believe that unpaid community service should be a compulsory part of high school programmes ( for example working for charity, improving the neighbourhood or teaching sports to young children). To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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high school programs. I agree with these

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because a great number of

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and upbringing.

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included in the school, there will be plenty of

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nature.

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money for themselves and for their good futures.

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school

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good

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already engaged in charity work in many places that it is possible for them.

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and necessary things or they go to a nursing home and entertain them with a concert.

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side, for

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get bad evaluations. After volunteering

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study, because they

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not physical strength and wish

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was strong work, and think

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of volunteering.

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, to carry heavy things that strain the volunteers or use volunteering more

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hours and to hold them

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by force. In conclusion, I agree with

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a great number of human is can do

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kindly

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and

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human despite

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knowledge.