Urbanisation has meant that more and more families are raising their children in the city; however, the countryside is a far better environment tbring up children. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion

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areas which are filled with a lot of facilities and it suits to raise kids. While

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the advantage of the

environment

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environmental

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aspect

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rural areas

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better to nurture juveniles than the

cities

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essay will examine both sides of the opinion and

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give a supporting idea to the latter opinion.

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of all, A lot of amenities in the

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as many schools and hospitals, are effective factors for children. Due to a process of land developments in the

cities

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which are focused on the economic aspect,

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can lead to a better quality infrastructure than the countryside. For

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reason, it indicates that a child who was born in

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place may have a lot of chances to grow and learn.

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education system in the centre city might produce an intense course for their teenagers, so these students can

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more opportunities for their success.

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, Growing in a country town can cause physical strength for long-term benefit.

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, they lack some amenities; fewer schools or fewer infirmaries,

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place has more natural resources than the towns. Improving children's knowledge and skills is an important thing for parents, but

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development of

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body is

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important too. Admittedly, teenagers need space to explore and

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develop themselves, the rural areas encourage them to do that.

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,fresh air and clean water are some of the resources which are vital factors to prevent juveniles from disease,

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, they may have quality growth. To conclude,

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, urbanisation might be more convenient, but I tend to agree with the latter opinion. Because a healthy body is the most necessary reason, they would lack an essence fundamental if they had not had a physical factor.

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, the ecosystem of the countryside is better to bring up juveniles.