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With the rise in popularity of the internet, newspaper will soon become a thing of the past. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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 illustration gives an idea of the production stage of materials and the production process of graphite pencils. We can describe the full process below.
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, before the day of getting appropriate wood, it is necessary to plant seedlings, wait four months and
then
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 replant them
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 the site.
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, after three years, it is necessary to thin out the forest and let the trees grow for another thirteen
year
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.
Secondly
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, thin "slats"are prepared and treated for sixty days.
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that
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the
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 recesses are cut
in
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into
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the
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thin slats. After that in the got
grooves
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 black lead rods are placed and covered with a
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 thin board (new slat) according to the sandwich principle.
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, the resulting structure is placed under a press and subjected to heat treatment for connection. The fourth stage includes cutting blanks for future pencils.
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 the blanks are painted, sharpened and packed in boxes as a finished product.
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For we to consider an essay structure a great one, it should be looking like this:

  • Paragraph 1 - Introduction
    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

Our recommended essay structure above comprises of fifteen (15) sentences, which will make your essay approximately 250 to 275 words.

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