Nowadays more and more people have to compete with young people for the same jobs. What problems does this cause? What are some possible solutions?

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There has been much discussion revolving around the issue of elderly
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inability to apply for the same jobs as
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of students nowadays are highly knowledgeable in technology,
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makes it easier for them to apply for a job. Aged
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, who don’t have much experience in working with technology are left behind,
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, many
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are getting jobless and have to barely make ends meet.
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friend, who is a teacher, that insufficient knowledge
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computers had
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real consequences during the years of
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, as technologies
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used every day and
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in their 50 had a hard time trying to learn new skills.
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the situation is global, there are still some solutions government could take to prevent it. Supporting elderly
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financially would help them to find better living conditions and to pay for some extra lessons to improve their knowledge.
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to learn new skills by giving them acceptable information resources and technics.
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many schools have given teachers equipment so they didn't have to buy everything on their own and have done free lessons for teachers on how to use the computer as well. To conclude, I consider that quickly learning young
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may take over others, which may cause
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increased poverty in
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society. In order to solve the problem,
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Answer the 'Problem and Solution' topic

Problem-and-solution essays fall naturally into two parts, the first describing and exploring the problem, the second setting out the solution or solutions.

You essay structure should look something like this:

  • Introduction
  • Body paragraph 1 – Problems
  • Body paragraph 2 – Solutions
  • Conclusion

Examples to start your body paragraph:

  • One of the first problems of the...
  • Another problem that needs to be considered...
  • A possible solution to this problem would be...
  • One immediate practical solution is to...

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