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2. Your child is going away on a school trip for three days to another country. The head teacher wants some parents to join the trip and you would like to go. Write a letter to the head teacher. In your letter: • Say why you would like to go • Suggest what you could do to help during the trip • Ask some more questions about the trip

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Dear
Mr.
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John, I am writing
this
 letter to express my interest
of
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 joining the
trip
 with my child. I would like to join
this
trip
 because my child suffers from asthma. As you are travelling to Australia, I believe during
this
 season temperature would be in minus degrees. Even though we tried to
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convince
convence
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convince
 my son, He is strongly willing to go. So we had no choice except to agree with him. I can help
taking
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 care of
children
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the children
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 and
feeding
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 them during
this
trip
 so that it would be
little
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 relaxing for you to enjoy the
trip
 and not
to
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worry much.
In addition
 to
this
, I will bring some instant food and snacks so that no one will be hungry. I would like to know
few
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 things regarding
this
trip
 is about the cost of the tickets for each person and
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accommodation
accomodation
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accommodation
? Can you
also
 explain
about
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the tourist visa process and what are the mandatory documents that we need to submit
.
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 I hope you would allow me to join
this
trip
 with my child. I am looking forward
for
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 your reply.
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Your
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 faithfully, Rachel Green.
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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

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Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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