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In some countries, governments are encouraging industries and businesses to move to regional areas outside the big cities. Do the advantages of this trend outweigh the disadvantages?

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Nowadays, we can realize governments are encouraging industries and businesses to move to regional
areas
 outside the big cities. Now we discuss that and recognize that it has a lot of reasons but no doubt it has more benefits than drawbacks.
Firstly
, if lots of businesses or workplace transfer to other
areas
,
initially
 these
areas
' populations are improving because of job opportunities.
Then
 other opportunities make improve other regional
areas
. Another advantage does not only does it decrease traffic jams in a big city but
also
 it helps diminish noise pollution. If we recognize recent
problems
this
 is a big problem in cities due to
people
are
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 stuck in traffic for hours it was very disturbing
that is
way
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 most
people
 tend to
work
 in regional
areas
difference
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 than big cities. Another reason why
people
 prefer to
work
 in
suburb
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areas
however
 regional
areas
' climates are fresh than the megacity. Regional
areas
 have more benefits for businessmen. Suburb
areas
 have more spacious
areas
, so it makes
people
work
 easier and they can easily set up their businesses.
Moreover
, the government suggests investigating if they agree to set up their business in regional
areas
. Another side, sometimes
people
 come across some troubles, I mean that they can't go to
work
in
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 time because of distance
thus
 makes waste their time. As we know
suburb
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areas
 have some drawbacks and they cause different
problems
. In conclusion, setting up your business in suburban
areas
 have more benefits not only for the owner but
also
 for your country. It influences recent
problems
 like traffic or climate changes and
also
 it helps to improve other regional
areas
 despite sometimes it
causes
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 waste of time or some other
problems
.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • regional areas
  • big cities
  • encouraging
  • industries
  • businesses
  • advantages
  • disadvantages
  • economic growth
  • overcrowding
  • traffic congestion
  • employment opportunities
  • balanced regional development
  • preservation of natural resources
  • quality of life
  • cultural diversity
  • lack of infrastructure
  • amenities
  • skilled workers
  • impact on the environment
  • decline in the economy
  • social and cultural challenges
  • integrating
  • new industries
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